Original publication

1983

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Opening Excerpt

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He’s sitting there staring at a piece of paper in front of him. He’s trying to break it down. He says,

I’m breaking it all down. The ticket was $600 and then after that there was more for the hotel and food and so on, for just ten days. Say $80 a day, no, more like $100 a day. And we made love, say, once a day on the average. That’s $100 a shot. And each time it lasted maybe two or three hours so that would be anywhere from $33 to $50 an hour, which is expensive.

Story Vibe & Style Profile

Literary Dimensions
Emotional Weight 2.0 / 5

Reflective

Narrative Pacing 1.2 / 5

Contemplative

Literary Style 1.1 / 5

Direct & Minimalist

Speculative / Reality 1.2 / 5

Realistic / Mimetic

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