Original publication

2016

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Opening Excerpt

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His belt buckle clanks against the floor of the bedroom, sounds so far away that he waits for an echo. He steps out of his jeans, nudges them aside with a bare foot. He pulls off his dark uniform shirt, balls it up in his hand, but before he can toss it away, his wife grabs it. She shakes it out and wraps it around the digital clock.

Story Vibe & Style Profile

Literary Dimensions
Emotional Weight 3.8 / 5

Bittersweet

Narrative Pacing 1.3 / 5

Contemplative

Literary Style 2.6 / 5

Clear Realism

Speculative / Reality 1.4 / 5

Realistic / Mimetic

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