Original publication

2001

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Helen still had trouble believing her eyes: Walter, all five-hundred pounds of him, lay naked in the bed with a girl, also naked, beneath him. Extending two fingers, Helen poked Walter's arm as if gauging the quality of a supermarket chicken. She asked the girl her name, and the muffled reply came back: Genevieve.

Story Vibe & Style Profile

Literary Dimensions
Emotional Weight 3.1 / 5

Bittersweet

Narrative Pacing 2.9 / 5

Deliberate

Literary Style 2.5 / 5

Clear Realism

Speculative / Reality 1.5 / 5

Realistic / Mimetic

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