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2003

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Sunday and the beautiful and sleek and unsmiling and too good for us Mavala Shikongo is gone. Second to last single woman teacher at an all boy's boarding school so far in the veld even the baboons feel sorry for us. They come and shit by our doors. Yes, Mavala Shikongo has escaped Goas after only a scant three weeks. She's found a better posting at a junior primary in Grootfontein. But twenty-one days was enough for us all, single or divorced or wanting to be divorced, decrepit or spry, morally repugnant or generally decentevery last one of us-to fall in love with her. She ignored us, twenty-one and one-half days we were invisible. Long schoolday afternoons she never once stopped by Aunty Wilhelmina's fence to monger the latest lies, only went home to her books.She was studying for a...

Story Vibe & Style Profile

Literary Dimensions
Emotional Weight 3.3 / 5

Bittersweet

Narrative Pacing 2.1 / 5

Deliberate

Literary Style 3.3 / 5

Contemporary Literary

Speculative / Reality 1.3 / 5

Realistic / Mimetic

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About the Author

Peter Orner is an American writer. He is the author of three novels, three short story collections and two books of essays. Orner holds the Professorship of English and Creative Writing at Dartmouth College and was formerly a professor of creative writing at San Francisco State University. He spent 2016 and 2017 on a Fulbright Grant in Namibia teaching at the University of Namibia.

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