Original publication

1969

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On the edge of the leaf a line of light, of yellow light born over the green escaped over the side catch it with a finger and then a hand he brought it up to his eye and put it through, bouncing on the ground the uneven road cracked the direction and he followed into the garden transparent and shiny to the sun.

Story Vibe & Style Profile

Literary Dimensions
Emotional Weight 2.3 / 5

Reflective

Narrative Pacing 1.1 / 5

Contemplative

Literary Style 4.3 / 5

Lyrical & Evocative

Speculative / Reality 2.1 / 5

Realistic / Mimetic

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